This week i am doing my writing about - Should we open the borders?
Should the NZ borders open? From my perspective, I think that the border should be closed for just at least a few more months , just until the delta variant has gone lower. Or else we might be more covid than we ever wanted before. Having the delta variant is especially hard because the delta variant is larger , more infectious, and more deadly. We don't want to risk any more delta because we already have enough. I know that a migrant mother is in NZ , without her children, but in my opinion we should wait until the delta has gone lower and add a few restrictions if the children have covid or worse , the delta variant. I don´t agree that the UK is doing such a good idea because their covid can be much worse than us, and giving freedom gives freedom to not only the people, but to the covid so the covid can spread to everyone in the UK. That’s why I think that We shouldn’t open the borders for a while.
Hi Irushi,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this quality piece of persuasive writing. You gave clear reasons and backed some of them up with evidence and explanations. In the future remember the rule of 1 idea per paragraph. This will make it easier for your reader to find the information.
Stay safe.
Oh, also, thank you for creating a quality blog post!
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